Weekend in Portbou – Deb Nicholson

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

We were staying on the Mediterranean coast right on the border of Spain and France. Catalan country. Wildly beautiful, rugged and tamed. Hot, lazy days at the beach.. Snorkelling, swimming, napping and people watching. This was not Nice or Cannes, there were families and ordinary folks doing ordinary stuff, whilst wearing speedos and espadrilles. Eating local tomatoes and ham in crunchy bread. Dinner at a beachside restaurant. Shit food but beer in bucket sized glasses and cheap, not nasty wine.

We were staying at a hotel, which could only be described as quirky. Run by two old women, daughters of the original owner, a Catalan freedom fighter. No air conditioning but we did have a private terrace dripping with raucous red, orange and purple bougainvillea. We dragged the mattress onto the terrace and after hilarious drunken sex, flaked it. At some point in the early hours we dragged the mattress indoors out of the rain. In the morning we went to retrieve our towels from the terrace wall, and wondered who had hung a towel up on the bathroom window facing the terrace. Hungover, it took a moment for it to sink in that this was the window of the room next door. Looking onto our “private” terrace. We kept our eyes down in the breakfast room, suppressing giggles and wondering which of our breakfast companions were our neighbours from the night before.

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Derrick’s Walk To Band Practise – Lleyton Trainer

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

Once upon a time there a man named Derrick, his eyes were black as pits and his hair dyed a strange silvery colour. Derrick was a punk, or at least, that’s what he liked to think of himself. He wore mostly black clothes, like he was right at that moment, with a leather jacket to look even cooler. His current black shirt has large white letters imprinted on the front spelling “Green Day”, his favourite punk band. In the right pocket of his black jeans, a chain swung merrily as he walked, the other end reaching across to his back left pocket. Every day, Derrick walked along the street to band practise, ignoring the strange looks people gave him. One day though, he was the one giving strange looks. A little girl had accidentally let go of a red balloon she had been carrying and was now crying, making an awful racquet as her mother attempted to give comfort. But it was not the girl that was strange.
As the red balloon floated into the sky, Derrick saw a pair of men making out on an electric pole. What was worse was that they were dressed as tradies and clearly weren’t doing their job. Because of that, Derrick shouted “DO YOUR JOB YOU FUCKING FAGGOTS!”
The two men broke apart and glared at Derrick, and the little girls’ mother shot Derrick an angry look, but Derrick didn’t care; he was a punk after all. The tradies started shouting abuse at Derrick (the mother now walking her child away as quickly as possible), and because of that, Derrick decided to ignore the abuse and keep walking, until finally he arrived at band practise, where he and his friends played “You Should Have Killed Me When You Had The Chance” by A Day To Remember (Derrick was doing the screamo part)
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GUNNAS PROMPT EXERCISE – Antonia Chaffey  

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

The pic I was given was of a woman in ‘50s shorts and shirt, nice heeled shoes, semi squatting, holding a piece of cord attached to a dead lobster (?) the other hand held something I couldn’t see due to photocopy quality. I now see it’s a glass of something…

The text: Cushioning Effect.

  1. “Once upon a time there was”

…A P.A. (Procrastinating/Practicing Artist/Pain in the Arse) who kept on and on at herself, no doubt bored her remaining friends to tears, and drove her remaining family crazy because all she could say was, “My life is OVER!” (being 67 ‘n all in the mix)

So, the more she said this to herself the more she began to believe it. So much so that she then began to plan her exit from this world.

It became tedious. Very tedious. The PA soon became aware that the ‘overness’ of her life had become an excuse for inertia.

(here I insert that I made a rule to self: don’t top yourself whilst the son is still alive…unless absolutely necessary)

  1. “Every day”

…when the bell rang, PA would run outside and play. Anything but work on her new piece. Soon enough that pesky script would re-emerge.

Only this time the words “who cares, nobody gives a shit, It’s all irrelevant anyway!”

  1. “One day”

…the shit really hit the fan. Soon it was a dawning realisation that NOTHING would change if she kept on that mouse wheel. It was like sitting on a dead lobster. Ref to text

Through some random turn of events, PA began to pursue a more anarchistic line of work: Turning dumped domestic items into works of art by inscribing notes on the human condition upon them (spray paint) taking photos of it and posting on social media, as well as amongst my art community.

It somehow became a ‘hit’….amongst the dog walkers, the street painters, and then my good neighbour, who said I should publish these pics.

  1. “Because of that”

…PA started a notebook of ‘ideas’ in readiness for the random discovery of discarded domestic items to write on.

The next step would be a pictures blog on her existing website (“serious art”)

But still those nagging little shits, DOUBT and SELF DENIGRATION IM NOT REPRESENTED BY A PRESTIGIOUS GALLERY kept popping up.

This ratbag factor became a ‘cushioning effect’

  1. “And, because of that”

…well, co-incidentally one of my street dump texts, a friend who follows CD sent me the comment re my ‘sofa so good’ piece. ( Hence the notice of the classes). I’ve edited that last bit as its obvious. Except to say I need to commit..EXERCISE

6”Until Finally”

DO IT!! (was it Jerry Rubin,….or…in the 60s who wrote that book, DO IT)

Immediately the ideas fell into place:

Get a booklet of street art printed. Text added

Write re the art scene…(eeew;;;;mmmnfnelwfawjej)

That’s the rant. That’s the struggle.

Artists don’t need to deal with the shit that the scene pumps out. They just need to do the work…and then kill themselves. Selves.   Selves.

Oops… I wasn’t going to mentions suicide again. But I did. And that’s a subject I am deeply interested in, as in CHOICE. When it comes to the ‘departure room’ as Clive James called it.

And, I didn’t even mention my dinner with Clive.

He came to my house for dinner. Ive written about dat.
tbc.

 

 

 

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The Don, The Prof, Bulldog & Smike – Debbie Brady

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

The pain was unbearable; Louis’ tormented mind couldn’t be relieved of the certainty that he was a failure, that the business would go broke, and he would let everyone down. He felt so many depended on him, his dear wife Golda, his four children, and the great friends he had shared so many hopes and dreams with; the unfulfilled wish to become the artist he wanted to be, and the pressure from the family to put all his efforts into the family cigar & cigarette factory, especially when he heard the rumour that the other company in Melbourne was going to bring his business down by circulating information that Snider & Abrahams products were laced with opium.

They had met at the National Gallery School; Louis was there in 1871-2 and again in 1879-84. All shared a vocation too powerful to ignore. They would go on to break new ground artistically and launch Australia’s impressionist era, influencing many artists to come. Louis Abrahams was a dapper dresser, hence his title ‘The Don’. Fred McCubbin tended to philosophise, and was known as ‘The Prof’. Tom Roberts was nicknamed ‘Bulldog’ because of his tenacious personality, he often drew himself as a bulldog. Arthur Streeton was known as ‘Smike’ after a Dickens character in Nicholas Nickelby, who shared Streeton’s slight physique. Their friendship extended beyond the classroom, they started painting outdoors and sharing meals where they read their favourite poems and literary extracts, camping out to paint in the Box Hill bush, or setting up easels at the beach at Mentone, or the countryside outside Geelong. Louis was expected to work in the family business, so he couldn’t work on his painting as much as he’d like and saw the others improve and extend themselves. He couldn’t match their talent but he could at least support them by supplying canvases and materials when they couldn’t afford to buy them, and he could buy paintings from them. He sat for hours as artists’ model, enjoying the time and the mateship. As their recognition grew, Louis was left behind, the nameless figure represented in paintings such as McCubbin’s prophetically titled ‘Down on his Luck’.
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Story – Julia Irwin

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

Once upon a time there was a “four legs” called Eccles.
He’d spent so long in jail he had no idea what he’d done wrong.
But one day his sentence ended and a family of “two legs” came and collected him from his cold, damp concrete cell.
Eccles could barely contain his excitement, wagging his tail and hanging his tongue out, willing his knew family to love him.
But he became a little concerned when the youngest “two legs” said they were changing his name to Scruffy – how undignified!
When the oldest two legs said, “Scruffy, you’re going to be an outside dog” and he saw the concrete backyard with nothing but a smelly old sleeping bag to lie on, his heart sunk. He’d gone from one jail to another.
Eccles tried to make the most of it, hoping the younger “two legs” might at least come out to play but they spent all their time sitting inside looking at screens.
Sometimes he’d scratch the door to remind them he was there but the only time his family came outside was to give him a clip around the ears.
Every day when the two legs went off to school or work, Eccles would cry out to the neighbours to rescue him.  Eventually, exhausted, he’d fall asleep.
One day, one of the smaller “two legs'” friends left the side gate open.
Eccles grabbed the chance to escape.
First he went looking for some of the “four legs” he’d heard in neighbouring backyards but soon realised they too were living behind bars – or at least very high fences.
Unsure what to do next, Eccles sniffed at the trees along the side of the road to catch up on the local news and find out what other “four legs” were up to.
He found out most of them were headed to a place called the lake.
Eccles followed the scent and there it was – water as far as the eye could see and more “two legs” and “four legs” than he could poke a stick at.
Wagging his tail enthusiastically Eccles bounded up to a handsome brindle “four legs” and athletic “two legs”, who was carrying a long stick with a tennis ball at the end.
Deciding to start the game, Eccles grabbed the ball between his teeth.
He was pleased when “two legs” raised the stick high in the air as if ready to play.
Thwack! Down it came hard across Eccles’ rump.
“Get out of here ya mongrel!” The two legs shouted while the brindle eyed Eccles sympathetically.
Tail between his legs, Eccles scampered to safety.
Heart still pumping hard, he picked up a beautiful scent – then he saw her. She was all fluffy and sweet in her black and white coat.
Eccles ran up to her, sniffing her tentatively.
She sniffed back then once he’d gained her concent, he jumped up on her from behind.
Thump! “Two legs” boot in the stomach sure hurt more than that plastic stick the other “two legs” hit him with.
With a yelp, Eccles scampered away.
He was starting to realise he couldn’t survive freedom and reluctantly headed back to his miserable home.
Following his nose, he was on the home stretch when he heard brakes squeal. A large, hairy “two legs” jumped out of a ute.
Arm stretched out, the “two legs” held out a meaty treat.
Thinking he was about to be rescued, Eccles ran towards the outstretched arm.
But before he could reach the treat, the “two legs” grabbed him by the collar and threw him into a cage in the back of the ute.
Before he knew it, Eccles was back in jail – the same jail where he’d spent most of his life.
Cowering in a corner, all hope gone, he never made the effort to wag his tail or jump up on the bars when ” two legs” came looking for a new family member.
Until finally, one day a “two legs” who looked even sadder than the way Eccles was feeling came to visit.
The “two legs” was recently widowed and was looking for a four legged companion to help get him out of the house.
He called out to Eccles who slowly walked over and gave the “two legs” a lick on the hand through the bars to cheer him up.
“Would you like to come home with me?” asked the two legs.
At last! This was the beginning of the life Eccles had only dreamed of.
Sleep-ins at the end of “two legs'” bed, ball games, liver treats and best of all – romantic walks around the lake.
The End

 

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“The Beginning” – a prompt exercise by Natalie Read

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

Words – “lucky dip”.

Picture – a naked young woman sitting on a sofa looking at a skeleton.

Prompts – underlined.

Once upon a time there was… Isn’t that the perfect beginning to a story? Actually, is there really a bad way to begin a story? Even if it doesn’t start well, by the very nature of it beginning it now has room to improve… Once upon a time there was a girl. And, as so often happens in these cases, once upon a time there was a boy. Well, a man technically, but a boy at heart in every way. There are many philosophies as to what brings us together in life – fate, destiny, or maybe it is all just a lucky dip. Whatever the reason, this girl and this boy were brought together. Not in an outstanding sort of way – mutual friends, the usual sort of thing – it was hardly love at first sight. “Like at first matching of wits” would be closer to the truth. Every day after they were brought together was, well every day was different. That’s life. Is there such a thing as an “every day” occurrence? There are always variants. Even your morning coffee differs in temperature and strength. But every day after they were brought together led to the next day they would meet. One day the boy asked the girl to go for a walk, just the two of them. It still wasn’t love, but the like was certainly growing and the wits were still matching. The walks became more frequent – more fun, more fulfilling – until it did, somewhat unexpectedly, become love. Not the sort of honeymoon, stars in your eyes kind of love that so often burns out as fast as it ignites, rather the sort of love that left them feeling as if they had been married for 45 years but had somehow not noticed the time passing them by. Because of that they grew together faster that they might have, catching up to the 45 years of togetherness that seemed to exist between them. The walks became dinners, the dinners led to nights, and the nights led to weeks in what would clearly be a lifetime of endless days and nights, of walks and dinners, of wits and love. And because of that it never crossed their mind – lifetimes are sometimes far from endless… Who knows what is at play when people are driven apart. Fate? Destiny? Or is it all a matter of luck? Whatever the ultimate cause, there came a night when the boy did not come home. Two men came to the door…. But not the boy – the boy would not be coming home again. There would be no more walks, no more wits…. But there would always be love. Because no amount of fate, destiny or luck can undo love. And so the girl goes on, her love undying, doing her best to live life for the both of them. Until finally, or so the girl hopes, they might be brought together again. Through fate, or destiny, or luck… In the afterlife? Or another life? Perhaps feeling a strange connection that seems to surpass the ages. Where the girl and the boy might begin their “once upon a time” all over again….

The Beginning.

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The Rise Of Rose (A RWBY Fanfic) –  Joel Campbell

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

–PROLOGUE–

The woods were silent. Not even a bird, calling out to its chicks could be heard. There was a thick layer of snow on the ground, among with many fallen trees that couldn’t stand the weight on the snow. Each of the trees in the mountain range was without leaves in this time of year but instead were tainted a bright white from the endless amount of snow gently drifting down from the sky, which gave them the nickname ‘ghost trees’. The branches on the trees faced upwards, and in their bare state, created the illusion that they were angrily demanding something from the gods. These trees overpopulated the valley, making it very hard to see a few metres in front of you.

It truly was a desolate place, with barely any animals visiting this area. Stuck in a huge valley between two mountainous ridges, it was almost impossible to get down. Almost. A small women, dressed in a white hood and cloak, was dashing in between the god-forsaken trees, dodging the snow that fell from the tips of the trees. She was clearly looking for something, and the ears on top of her head kept straining and moving as she tried to hear something. Then she heard it.

Screaming. High pitched, ear shattering screaming that completely destroyed the serenity and silence of the night. She quickened her pace and felt the beginnings of a furious growl in her chest. The screaming continued, getting louder and louder as she got ever closer to the source. She leapt over fallen trees and tried not to slip as she crossed a frozen lake. The screaming was nearby, but it echoed throughout the winter wonderland she was currently in. She stopped moving as she heard something that made her blood stop.

“MUUUUUUUUUUM!” Came the long, drawn out, torturous scream. Her lips pulled back into a wicked snarl, she sprinted faster than she had ever moved before, getting ever closer to the screams. Crossing the lake, she saw a large log cabin amidst a dense area of trees. She was exhausted, and her head was throbbing painfully from the blow to her face from her daughter’s captors. But nothing would stop her, nothing will stop her from getting her daughter.

“MUUUUM, PLEASE!” The scream pierced the night, shattering all rational thoughts from her head. She dashed to the cabin and smashed the door down.

“RUBY! WHERE ARE YOU!” She screamed.

“MUM! HELP ME!” Ruby’s voice appeared to come from beneath her. Locating a staircase downwards, she jumped down. The staircase was massive, going down at least 20 metres. She turned a corner, and her body clenched up in anger. Her daughter was sobbing and screaming uncontrollably, in the middle of the room. She was strapped to a table, and four men surrounded her. They were huge, giants seemingly made only of muscle. They all appeared to hold a form of dust in their hands.

“What the fuck do you think you’re doing to my baby!” She screamed loudly. All four men turned around.

“Well well well, looks like mother wolf has come to save her pup.” The man closest to her said as he laughed. “Too bad she’s too late.”

“What are you talking about!?” She exclaimed. The man simply laughed.

“The process is done! Unfortunately for you, this is the last time you’ll see your daughter.” Her eyes flashed with anger. She growled menacingly, and her ears and tail became fully erect. The man’s eyes widened, as panic briefly flashed through his eyes. But it was only for a second, as he lunged at her. She quickly sidestepped the man and brought her fist down on his temple with strength deceiving for her size. The man folded like a sack of potatoes, and the light in his eyes faded. She glared menacingly at the other men.

Without a second thought, she threw herself at the closest man, swinging her right fist at him. He ducked, but he didn’t see her knee as it slammed into his nose, destroying it. Blood was streaming down his face, and his nose was flattened. But he wasn’t done.

He reached out and grabbed her ankle. He pulled her to the floor and pulled out a sword. He thrust at her, but she quickly leapt out of the way and landed on her feet. She retreated a few paces, only to see the two other men pulling out swords, and approaching her menacingly.

She pulled out her own weapons, which were twin katanas. They were a brilliant white but seemed to almost glow red. She swung one, and embers flew off the edges of the sword. The men both lunged at her, one swinging high and the other swinging at her legs. She leapt into the air, blocking the sword aimed at her throat.

She half flipped in mid-air, and as she flew over the man’s head, she swung both swords into his chest. They pierced his lungs, and thanks to the fire dust embedded in the katanas burned him. His blood superheated and boiled as he shouted in agony, screaming for mercy.

She pulled her katanas out of the dying man’s chest and flipped out of the way of the other man’s sword. He swung again, this time clipping her cloak. The man stepped forward and aimed a blow at her midsection. She readied her katanas, preparing for the blow to come. But as he brought the sword down, the quickly spun and changed the trajectory of his strike.

She brought both her swords forward, desperate to defend herself. A loud clang reverberated throughout the small area they were in as their weapons bounced off each other. She stumbled backwards at the strength of his blow, and he kept pressing the advantage.

Seeing that she was off balance, he wound his arm back, preparing to deliver his strongest hit. She realised that his entire left side was unprotected, so she darted forward, keeping herself close to the ground. She dragged her katanas on the ground, allowing them to spark as she lifted them up, and thrust them into his side.

She jumped up, pulling out one if the katanas as he aimlessly flailed his sword around, desperately trying to kill her. Suspended in midair, she delivered a vertical strike to the man’s throat and watched him gargle as his throat filled up with blood.

“You’re not too bad, you know that?” The man with the broken nose called out. She glanced around and caught sight of him. He was standing next to Ruby, his sword against her throat. She felt her pulse quicken. Ruby was sweating profusely, and her eyes were wide with fear.

“Let her go!” She shouted desperately.

“Now now, where’s the fun in that!” He said as he laughed. “How about you put your weapon down, and we can discuss things like rational adults?” She looked at her feet and dropped the katanas.

“What do you want?” She asked quietly, venom lacing her voice.

“I simply want to leave here with my life.”

“Then give me my daughter, and I’ll leave you alone.”

“See, I don’t think it’s gonna work like that. My boss has put way too much time and money into this girl to simply let her walk away.”

“What have you done to her? What interested could you possibly have in a ten-year-old girl?” She growled.

“We have merely improved her.” He shrugged. “Now, you’re gonna leave, and never come back. In return, your precious daughter won’t be slaughtered.” Her whole body tensed, shaking in anger. She looked at Ruby. Ruby nodded at her. She bent over to pick up her katanas.

“What do you think you’re doing?” The man cried out.

“Leaving,” She said. But at that moment, a flurry of roses petals erupted from where Ruby stood. With Ruby out of the way, she sprinted forward and buried her weapons into the man’s eyes. He screamed, but it was quickly cut off as the blades penetrated his brain. She pulled her katanas out as he slumped to the ground.

“Mum!” Ruby cried, as she leapt into her mother’s embrace.

“There there,” She said back, as she wrapped her tail around Ruby. “Let’s get out of here Ruby.” They stood up, and Ruby clenched her mother’s hand. Snow was drifting down from the sky as they walked out.

“Mum, I’m too tired,” Ruby said quietly as if simply talking was too much for her. Ruby’s mother picked her up and cradled her. She quickly realised that Ruby was extremely hot to touch.

“Ruby, are you feeling ok? You’re burning up!” She exclaimed.

“They said this would happen…” Ruby said tiredly.

“Who said what dear?” She questioned.

“They said the dust would change me,” Ruby mumbled, trying to keep her eyelids open. Ruby’s mother’s eyes widened at this. She almost collapsed in shock.

“They said what!?”

“They said… that the dust would… change me…” Ruby muttered, before falling asleep.

“Did they really… No, they couldn’t have. It hasn’t been done for decades, centuries even. Surely she misheard, or imagined it.” She thought to herself, as she readjusted Ruby in her arms. She bolted away, needing to get home as fast as possible.

She emerged in a small clearing, with trees surrounding her on all sides but one. On the north side, was a humongous cliff. She peered over the edge, but she couldn’t see the bottom. She walked away, and her pocket started to vibrate. She sighed, and gently lay Ruby down in the clearing. She pulled her scroll out her pocket.

“Summer, do you read me?” Summer smiled.

“Good evening Tai. I found her.” Summer heard a loud sigh of relief.

“Oh thank gods,” Tai muttered. “Are you far away now?”

“Yeah, I’m about an hour away. Ruby fell asleep the moment I got her, and she hasn’t woken.”

“Poor girl…” Taiyang said sadly. “She’s been through so much.” Summer’s ears pricked up as she heard a twig snap in the distance.

“Look, Summer-”

“Tai, quiet!” Summer whispered harshly. The ears on the top of her head wriggled about, straining to hear any sign of movement.

“Summer, what’s wrong?” Taiyang asked, concern creeping into his voice. Then Summer saw them. Huge, black beasts that resembled bears emerged from the tree line. They had massive claws, and bone armouring over their body, which had strange markings on  them. There were four of them, and they rushed out of the tree line and sprinted straight at Ruby. Summer realised that these monsters were Ursa. She threw the scroll the ground, drew her weapons and charged in.

“I JUST GOT HER BACK!” Summer screamed as she slashed the neck of the nearest Ursa. “DON’T YOU DARE TOUCH HER!” The Ursa nearest to her stumbled forward and swiped at her. She flipped backwards, her back foot skidding on the edge of the cliff. Summer cursed as she leapt forward again.

“Summer!” Taiyang called through the scroll. Summer didn’t reply as she noticed a large pack of similar looking beasts emerge out of the tree line, however these ones resembled wolves, not bears. Ruby slowly stirred to life, and her eyes widened in horror as she saw the scene in front of her. Her mother stood in front of Ruby, and before her were three Ursa, and thirty or forty of the wolves, which were called Beowolves.

All of the Beowolves sprinted at Summer at once, but she cut through the first wave like it was nothing. Limbs were flying, and blood was painting the snow. Summer was hacking at everything in her path, leaving nothing but a trail of destruction.

One of the Ursa galloped at Summer and reared on it’s hind legs as Summer approached it. The Ursa howled, and soon enough the other two surrounded her. She leapt onto the chest of the Ursa in front of her and shoved a katana into its heart. Summer backflipped away, pulling the katana out as the Ursa fell backwards.

She landed on the head of a Beowolf as it sprinted the past, and planted her blades into its brain. It collapsed and skidded along the ground, and Summer was forced to roll off it.

She sprinted at one of the Ursa but realised as she got closer that she couldn’t the see the other one. She was about to leap onto the Ursa when the other one rammed into her, sending her flying. She dropped one of her katanas in midair, and couldn’t see where it landed. She landed heavily, further injuring her ribs. She struggled to breathe as she was winded. The rest of the Beowolves charged at her.

Out of nowhere, Ruby leapt into the fray with Summer’s other katana. She decapitated the leading Beowolf and sliced the arms off the Beowolf behind it. One of the Beowolves leapt at her, and Ruby was forced to dodge its flailing arms. One of the beasts came from behind her, and Ruby quickly pivoted, dodging it’s arms and puncturing its heart.

Summer was exhausted. She’d been fighting for almost an hour, and every time she killed, another two seemed to take its place. But she couldn’t leave Ruby. Ruby was fighting like never before, determined to get out of this frozen hell. But she too, was beginning to tire. A Beowolf stuck at her, and Ruby couldn’t raise her blade in time. The beast swatted the katana away and began swing at Ruby.

Ruby rolled underneath the arm of the beast and jumped onto it’s back. The Beowolf squirmed and tried to get its assailant off it’s back, but to no avail. Ruby then grasped the beast’s head between her hands. The beast howled in pain as Ruby’s hands got hotter and hotter. The screaming got louder and louder until Ruby’s hands were aflame.

But shockingly, it didn’t cause her any pain. Ruby jumped away as the beast erupted into flames, causing the Beowolves who were nearby to panic. Summer, meanwhile, was struggling to take down the two Ursa. She was exhausted, but her maternal instincts refused to let her stop.

Until she slipped. She face planted and rolled away just before an Ursa crushed her. Ruby looked over and saw Summer in trouble.

“Mum!” She shouted as she leapt over the Beowolves in between them. She activated her semblance and dashed to her mum in a flurry of rose petals. But to her horror, she realised her mum was being held down by one of the Ursa.

“MUM RUN!” Ruby screamed, her voice tearing at her throat. Summer looked up and smiled.

“I love you Ruby!” Summer said, unusually calm.

“MUUUUUUM!” She yelled hysterically, tears streaming down her face. She kept sprinting, but it was too little, too late. The other Ursa stomped down, shattering Summer’s skull, killing her instantly.

“NOOOOO!” Ruby fell to her knees, disregarding the fact that the was in serious danger. She screamed into the night, crying uncontrollably as the Grimm closed in. However, many long sharp icicles were raised from the ground and surrounded Ruby. She leapt up, and threw her arms and legs back, sending the icicles hurtling towards the Grimm that surrounded her. The icicles buried themselves into the vital organs of every single Grimm in the area. They howled out in pain, and slowly crumpled towards the ground.

Ruby slowly crawled to Summer, openly weeping as she did.

“Mum, please wake up,” She said softly. She poked her shoulder. It was obvious that her head had caved in, thanks to the tremendous power of the Ursa, which had somehow managed to break through her aura.

“Mum, please. Don’t leave now. MUM PLEASE!” Ruby shouted, not caring of anymore Grimm heard her.

“Ruby?” Her ears pricked up as she heard her name in the distance, but she didn’t care. She kept crying, almost to the point of hyperventilating. She crawled until she was next to her mum, and rolled up into a ball.

“Ruby? Ruby!” Taiyang called out. He’d obviously ran the whole way from their house. “Ruby what’s…” His voice trailed off as he saw Summer.

“No… No please…” He said weakly, trying to believe that she was alive. Taiyang stayed motionless for a few minutes, trying to comprehend the tragedy in front of him. He turned to Ruby. She had cried until there was nothing left, and now just rocked back and forth, while sucking her thumb. With glistening eyes, he picked up Ruby. They walked home in silence, praying that this was all just a horrible nightmare.

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No Excuses – Louise French

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

 

New Year. Time for change.

What am I gunna do.

Procrastinate. Facebook! What did we do before Facebook?

Look. A masterclass!

Google.

Ohh, do I like her? Do I like what she has written? Have I even read anything she has written?

Must have, she wrote for The Age.

Just do it. Stop thinking about it.

Never gunna do it without the first step.

Book. Commit.

Do I really want to go?

Better things to do with my Saturday.

Like what? Facebook. Just go!

Lots of people.

I am sure they are all writers.

Not like me, just a gunna.

Maybe not!

Everyone needs some support; a push; permission to create.

Write in bits, it all adds up.

You aren’t creating world peace, you are just trying to write!

Make a space. A mental space. Delineate.

Just get it down.

Just write!

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Introducing… Single Girl 2 Stepmum – Stephanie de Lancelle

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

I didn’t follow the traditional path.  None of the ‘typical’ girl meets boy, falls in love, gets married and lives happily ever after.
Well actually, I did do that.  But not the way you’d think.  And not in that order.  And not just us.
His three kids were along for the ride.  And as a twenty-something who’d been used to looking after myself, and with (so I thought) no one else who could relate to the experience, this was the beginning of an enormous but daunting adventure.  And a whole set of challenges I had never imagined.  Part of a truly modern love story that I’m happy to share…
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Can we talk about how the government contributes to domestic violence?  – Serrin Dipity

Another brilliant piece from a GUNNAS WRITING MASTERCLASS WRITER.

 
I’ve had this idea kicking around in my head for a while.  It has changed a great deal in the time since I first had it.  When I had my daughter, my partner already had a five-year-old who was living in a different state with her mother for the majority of the time.  My stepdaughter’s mother, Sally, was on a single parent payment as her only source of income at the time.  Anyway, when Brian looked into updating the information he gave to CSA (Child Support Agency) about his new child, we knew that this would reduce the child maintenance payments he had to give his ex-partner.  This was because he now had two dependents, his two daughters.  The thing is, because I was not working at the time and was unable to work because I was caring for our daughter, I was also financially dependent on Brian.  However, I did not count as a dependent as far as CSA was concerned.  Or, rather, I did count as a dependent for two weeks prior to the birth of our child and for four weeks following the birth of our child, so six weeks in total.
This is in contrast to the situation six years previously, when Sally first moved down from Queensland to live with Brian.  She already had a son from a previous relationship and, once again, her sole source of income for herself was the single parent payment.  When she moved in with Brian, as soon as she was spending more than two nights a week under the same roof as him, her single parent benefit was withdrawn.  This was because Brian’s income was such that it was enough for the two of them.  Sally still received child support from her son’s father, but the way child support works in Australia is that this money is provided for the child and is intended to support only the child.  We don’t have the concept of alimony, at least not in the circles I move in.
At the time, I was merely struck by how completely unfair it was.  When we were talking about Brian having to pay money, he was not allowed to count me as a dependent.  However, when the government is the one paying the money, as soon as Sally had another means of support, they withdrew her income, the only source of income she had for herself.  From the perspective I was in then, with a newborn baby and an awful lot of our household income going interstate every month, I thought that Brian should have been able to claim me as a dependent, thereby paying Sally less for his eldest daughter.
I hadn’t thought about this dichotomy in years, and my daughter is now almost seven.  A couple of months ago, I was sitting at Sally’s kitchen table in Brisbane, having a chat about the vagaries of child support.  Because these days we are all uber-mature and we can have these conversations.  I guess a lot of factors changed my perspective, including the improved relationship with Sally, my own confidence in my relationship with Brian and my own financial security.  Also, this was towards the end of the year where Rosie Batty was Australian of the Year and, as a result, domestic violence has been spoken of nationally a great deal.  For any and all of these reasons, I turned the situation around and had a good look at it from Sally’s point of view, that day around 13 years ago when she rang to update her living situation with Centrelink.  From this perspective, she had a 3 year old son for whom she received a small amount of child support from her ex-husband.  The income she received for her own maintenance, however, was limited to the single parent payment.  She moved in with her boyfriend, earlier than she would have had they been living in the same state and, because he earned a good wage, she lost the entirety of the money available to her to support herself.  This made her completely financially dependent upon her relatively new boyfriend.  There is no other way to look at it.  All the money that she had to support herself was from the government and this was removed as soon as she and her boyfriend began living in the same house.
Now, I haven’t been paying as much attention to current affairs as I’d like to, being busy with attempting a new career, lots of volunteer work and just generally living, but I have heard a few snippets of the dialogue Rosie Batty and many others have been stimulating.  From what I have heard, the answer to “Why don’t women just leave?” is fairly simple: They don’t feel they can.  Women stay in abusive relationships because they have the perception they cannot survive on their own.  What if this perception is accurate?  It seems to me that a policy of removing all of a woman’s independent income the moment she moves in with a man of adequate means is a recipe for domestic abuse.   He might not turn out to be controlling (Brian didn’t) but what if he did?  When he tells her “You can’t survive without me”, it’s true.  Even if he’s not violent, suddenly taking on the financial support of another person is a pretty big stress on a relationship, and I question whether relationships that are that uneven from the start are healthy.
I have a lot more I want to explore about this topic.  I just think that if A Current Affair can run a poll about whether women on welfare should be forced to take contraceptives, we can have a chat about the government making women entirely dependent on the men in their lives.  And whether that is okay with us.
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